Kevin O’Leary and Barbara Corcoran both gave great expert
advice regarding different aspects of a business plan. I agree with Kevin when
he states that a business plan idea should have the capability of being
explained in 90 seconds or it is dead in the water. The major concepts of a
plan for opening a business should be very simple to convey once the decision
is made to involve investors. Angels have the resources to make a new product
available to large masses as well increase the products potential revenue
return.
Barbara Corcoran stated that although a written business plan is important, it is more important to be able to explain your business
plan verbally. I agree with Barbara as well, a written business plan is very
effective especially when the process is in different phases of being built. In
the initial stages though, being able to express your vision of a business may
get a better response and give a business a faster leap of getting stated.
I intend to incorporate both pieces of advice from the
experts, Kevin O’ Leary and Barbara Corcoran for my business plan. In a sense,
both experts completed the same thought. They discussed the power of expressing
your plans for a business by speaking to people.

The section I consider to be the most important to the investors
reading my business plan is the monthly sales projections. This section allows
the investors an opportunity to see how much revenue my company has the
potential of making up to three years.
References:
Shark Tank http://abc.go.com/shows/shark-tank/bio/kevin-oleary/276282
explainify http://explainify.com/shark-tank-kevin-oleary-90-second-pitch
YE Young Entrepreneur http://www.youngentrepreneur.com/startingup/startup-business-ideas/barbara-corcorans-6-pearls-of-wisdom-for-young-treps/